Monday, December 12, 2005

dying (complete story)

you can read the whole short story here.

i would love any feedback you may have


  1. I printed the whole thing out. As I said previously, this is one intense story. I really admire when someone can pack this much power into a story.
    I also admire people who can actually write good short stories. I'm way too much of a windbag to ever accomplish this!
    You're very talented. I hope you're feeling better than you seem to be in some of the posts that came after this one.
    Cheesy 1

  2. thanks cheesemeister. with one more paper left to write, my despair of this semester should shortly come to and end.


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